writing: A memorable day

I remember my Christmas one year ago. It was a very memorable day.
First my family go to home of my grandparents and my uncle. At 10 o'clock all people went to shit the wood “tio” and it gives me a lots of presents. After all family went to have dinner and I meet with my cousins. At 11 o'clock we look a film called “Solo en casa” and I laugh a lot because it's a comic film. Finally about four o'clock I go to sleep with my cousin.

There were twelve people (all family) at the Christmas day. I remember all presents because all are computer games or novels. It was a great and fun day.